Every coin has two sides. Similar to that, every person has their own strengths and weaknesses in different kind of fields. For instance, a person might be good at studies but not in sports. In the case of writing, some writers might be good at writing autobiographies, but one might not be good at writing profiles.
In my case, I am good at writing profiles because I love to write in a descriptive way. I am the kind of person who always likes to explain things in a simple language as well as like to learn in a simple language. I think it’s because of these personality traits, I write in a descriptive way. Also, an easier way to write good profiles is better observation. Good observation will lead us to have a different perception of things which we want to write on.
In writing my Profile Draft 1, I will look forward to using a better vocabulary as I know that whenever I write, I write in the easy language. While writing my TIB (This I Believe), I was trying to have a different perception with a clear mind every time whenever I was editing my drafts. For improving vocabulary one can use the internet to explore more words and use them in their articles.
On TIB (This I believe) Draft 2, my teacher commented,” Make your personal story more specific; it is too general. Proofread for grammar, capitalization, punctuation and word choice errors. Also, look for left-out words.” (M. Isaac, personal communication, February 8, 2019). For solving this issue, I have to start with a fresh mind and use grammatical tools to check on my grammatical errors.