Writing a profile is not an easy task, at least not for everyone. A good way of writing anything to write in drafts, so, each drafts can be better than previous one and eventually, final one would be the best of all. Refining each and every draft during the process of writing is an important task. I did that too and it affected my piece of writing very well.

My first draft was very simple with some grammatical mistakes, authentic voice and some citation problem. During writing my Draft 2 I considered my all mistakes but still, made some other mistakes like explanation problems and some reference formatting. I didn’t know my mistakes until my teacher commented on my draft 2 on my website. So, now I am looking forward to correct my earlier mistakes and not making new ones.

Even my teacher commented on my Profile draft 2 about my citation mistakes and some other explanation issues. I will try to focus more and try to review all other drafts to take out best things out of them and somehow, insert them in my final version. So hopefully, my final version will contain only positive points from each drafts.

I think I focused enough on vivid explanations like taking seeing sensation to explain about ‘Best Buy’. So, points which I will be looking for to create a good Profile would be correct spelling, correct format for reference, authentic voice, etc. I have enough time to do my final version of profile so, it’s better to think more rather than creating in hurry.