My profile is based on an interview about the life of my boss and his journey as a cook in Canada. When i wrote my first draft, I was pretty satisfied with its quality. There is a clear and coherent flow to the story and I express the key points of the interview as concrete as possible. Nevertheless, since it is still just a first draft, there is bound to be few errors and inconsistences in it. First off, i started with a grammar check, where I found just shy of a dozen error. To improve my profile’s impact and better retain the reader’s attention, I have replace all repeated terms with their synonymes and remove all redundant ideas. To make it easier to read, i have also slightly rearranged my profile to make seperate paragraphs that would give it more structure. I have also further developed my introduction and add a sentimental conclusion that can provide a personal lesson for me and my reader. I am happy with the progress of my profile and for my final draft, I only need to add some more personal commentaries and reflections. The core of my profile is already present and all the information about the subject of my profile has already been delivered. The personal opinions will only be there to add more substance to my writing.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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